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Kalona
Part 1
-Mom, when I grow up I wanna be a king, and rule over our country! Kalona said to his mother when he was five years old and his family were sitting in the living room.
-Ofcourse you can, his mother said and smiled.
-Haha, don’t be silly! His father said to him and laughed. You would never be able to rule, you are too weak!
His mother stared at his father but didn’t say anything. His father started to read the newspaper.
-Mom, what happend to your neck? Kalona asked his mother, It has red marks on it..
-Oh, it’s okay honey, it is nothing, I just fell on a rock in the garden, haha, i’m so clumsy! His mother answered. She smiled, but her eyes were sad, and it looked like she was going to cry, but she just kept smiling…
When Kalona was 11 years old he had realised that his mother didn’t get all her marks on her body from falling, he had heard his father hit her, and seen it as well. And one night, when there was a storm outside and the rain just kept falling, he woke up by his mother’s scream. They were fighting, and this time it sounded really bad.
-No, please don’t! Think about our son, your son! He’s just 11, he can’t survive on his own! It was his mother begging.
-Like I care!? I never even wanted him! His father screamed. He sounded furious.
Kalona didn’t know what to do, he tried to think but he was so scared. He remembered that his father had guns in his office, so he tried to be as quiet as he could and ran there. He found one. It was already loaded, and he got down to the kitchen, where his mother sat on the floor, she was crying and begging that his father wouldn’t shoot her. He looked at his father, who was standing with a gun in his hand. He looked at Kalona, his son, with only hate in he’s eyes.
-Wh..what are you doing!? Kalona screamed, with the gun pointing at his father.
-Shoot me, or I will kill her, his father said.
But he couldn’t, he couldnt kill his own father. He dropped the gun on the floor and tears were coming from his eyes.
-Like I said, you are weak. You will never become a king. Never, his father said with a big smile.
-Kalona, honey, I love you, and I always will, his mother said.
Then, it all became quiet in Kalonas head, it was like he saw everything in slowmotion. His father looking at Erfinna, Kalonas mother, the most beautiful woman that ever existed, and then, suddenly, she was dead. His father shot her in her head, and now, there was blood on the floor, and the wall behind her. Kalona fell down on the floor screaming. His father dragged him up from the floor, holding in Kalonas hair. His head was in so much pain, both physically and mentally. His father threw him into a wall and he passed out. When he woke up he was lying in a pile of his mother's blood.
-Ofcourse you can, his mother said and smiled.
-Haha, don’t be silly! His father said to him and laughed. You would never be able to rule, you are too weak!
His mother stared at his father but didn’t say anything. His father started to read the newspaper.
-Mom, what happend to your neck? Kalona asked his mother, It has red marks on it..
-Oh, it’s okay honey, it is nothing, I just fell on a rock in the garden, haha, i’m so clumsy! His mother answered. She smiled, but her eyes were sad, and it looked like she was going to cry, but she just kept smiling…
When Kalona was 11 years old he had realised that his mother didn’t get all her marks on her body from falling, he had heard his father hit her, and seen it as well. And one night, when there was a storm outside and the rain just kept falling, he woke up by his mother’s scream. They were fighting, and this time it sounded really bad.
-No, please don’t! Think about our son, your son! He’s just 11, he can’t survive on his own! It was his mother begging.
-Like I care!? I never even wanted him! His father screamed. He sounded furious.
Kalona didn’t know what to do, he tried to think but he was so scared. He remembered that his father had guns in his office, so he tried to be as quiet as he could and ran there. He found one. It was already loaded, and he got down to the kitchen, where his mother sat on the floor, she was crying and begging that his father wouldn’t shoot her. He looked at his father, who was standing with a gun in his hand. He looked at Kalona, his son, with only hate in he’s eyes.
-Wh..what are you doing!? Kalona screamed, with the gun pointing at his father.
-Shoot me, or I will kill her, his father said.
But he couldn’t, he couldnt kill his own father. He dropped the gun on the floor and tears were coming from his eyes.
-Like I said, you are weak. You will never become a king. Never, his father said with a big smile.
-Kalona, honey, I love you, and I always will, his mother said.
Then, it all became quiet in Kalonas head, it was like he saw everything in slowmotion. His father looking at Erfinna, Kalonas mother, the most beautiful woman that ever existed, and then, suddenly, she was dead. His father shot her in her head, and now, there was blood on the floor, and the wall behind her. Kalona fell down on the floor screaming. His father dragged him up from the floor, holding in Kalonas hair. His head was in so much pain, both physically and mentally. His father threw him into a wall and he passed out. When he woke up he was lying in a pile of his mother's blood.
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Anonymous
Sun 3 Jul 2011 10:58
några små grammatikfel som jag ville peta på..
När det är typ "hans mor" eller dylikt skriver man "his", inte "he's", och det heter physically, som i fysiskt, och mentally, som i mentalt/psykiskt. Annars var den både sorglig och bra. :3
När det är typ "hans mor" eller dylikt skriver man "his", inte "he's", och det heter physically, som i fysiskt, och mentally, som i mentalt/psykiskt. Annars var den både sorglig och bra. :3
BubbleGoth
Sun 3 Jul 2011 11:15
Så, nu ska allavara ändrade tror jag, lol, satt och ändrade allt i går trodde jag o-o hm!
Anonymous
Sun 3 Jul 2011 17:44
petade ännu djupare nu. xD
Livingroom ska ha ett mellanslag, Living room.
Answered är rätta stavningen.
"The most beautiful women ever existed"
När det är i singular säger man inte women, då säger man woman. Och du får ändra det antingen till "that ever existed" eller "ever existing"
Fan vad bossig jag blev xD Men, sån e jag :3
Livingroom ska ha ett mellanslag, Living room.
Answered är rätta stavningen.
"The most beautiful women ever existed"
När det är i singular säger man inte women, då säger man woman. Och du får ändra det antingen till "that ever existed" eller "ever existing"
Fan vad bossig jag blev xD Men, sån e jag :3
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