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Här är hela kapitelt inkluderat det jag redan postat....Konan och
Insomnalia kan hoppa över den röda biten eftersom jag vet att de
redan läst den....höhöhö. (har dock tagit bort en del från den röda
delen för jag och konan har ändrat en bit i deras bakgrund........
Chapter 1
My eyes were on the verge of popping out of their sockets and roll away
across the floor. Where they would undoubtedly get smashed by the horde
of busy people rushing around.
I pushed my glasses higher up on my nose. Sure, I had expected the big
city to be huge, but my imagination hadn't prepared me for this. What should
I do? This giant monstrosity was only the central station. How are we even
going to find him when I can't even find the ba....
"Hey Al, stop brooding and get a move on!" His shoulder length golden hair
shimmered as he darted past me and through the crowd.
"Rocco, wait!!" I hoisted my backpack and grabbed a hold of my trolley.
Then I rushed after him. With his legs being about half my length I easily
caught up with him.
"I really need to use the bathroom, but I can't seem to find that either."
I continued as I fell into a stroll next to him. He rolled his eyes and pointed.
"You've already seen them, seriously man, your powers of attention
are still thoroughly lacking even after 12 years." He smirked and I pouted.
"Well, excuse me for having the observation skills of a toddler." He rolled his
eyes as we headed towards the signs, but the smirk was still present so I
knew he was amused.
"You're not excused, you need to do something about it." He replied and I
continued to pout as we followed the signs not only promising toilets but
showers too. I desperately needed one after spending the night sitting in
a train seat.
Instead of trying to make the trains go faster maybe they first should put
a thought into making the seats more comfortable, sure, we wouldn't have
to sit so long in them but trains can't fly. They will take time no matter how
fast they make them. So better seats to the train riding people. I concluded
as we came to an entrance and my attention got hijacked.
We entered the room at the left corner of the short side. We got stopped
short just after entering though, as our way forward was obstructed by a
gate. The gate was on it's left side connected to the wall and on the right
side connected to a counter that spanned the rest of the short side of
the room.
My, we don't have any bath rooms like these in our home town.
The room was pretty narrow, past the gate and the counter the room
was just a passageway with doors on either side. At the wall at end of
the corridor a big clock proclaiming the time to be 6:30 am hung.
That's when something moved at the corner of my eye and I noticed
the attendant manning the counter, an elf. He had a tan and his eyes
were a deep orange color. His hair was just a shade or two lighter and
it was cut pretty short so I could see that his ears were shorter then
Rocco's.
I wonder if their ears grow longer as they grow older? Too bad I can't
ask now.
"Would you please stop drooling and get a move on?" Rocco grumbled,
I blushed and tapped lightly on counter. The elf looked up from his
magazine and looked at me with a questioning glance.
"Yeah?" He asked after we had been staring at each other for a couple of
moments. Rocco was still grumbling and rolling his eyes at me.
"Um, I'd like to use a bathroom?" I fidget and could feel my whole body
turning red. As a natural redhead I tend to shine as bright as a tomato
on crack when I blush.
"Yeah, that's usually what people do they come here." He snorted and
seemed kind of annoyed that I had bothered him. I got kind of offended.
"I'm sorry, um, but......." I replied. I really didn't know how I should formulate
myself.
"Oh for Christ sake. Just pull your credit card through the card reader on
the gate. It's not brain surgery. If you want to use a shower room they are
at the end of the corridor and there's a shower towel in the rooms just put
it in the hamper when you're done with it." He grunted and then returned
to his magazine. I had a closer look at the gate and spotted the card
reader. Then I did as he said and walked down the corridor. I choose the
second door from the end of the corridor and walked in. I don't like corners.
~*~
I pulled a hand through my damp inch short permanently dyed jet black
hair. Well, as 'permanent' as a hair dye can be and stared at myself in the
mirror. Would he recognize me now? Would I recognize him? I took the
towel from my shoulders and put it into the hamper under the mirror.
He ran away when he was 14 and left us all behind. Now, about 6 years
later, I was following in his tracks trying to find him. The others would follow
me in a year or two but I had promised them I would have found him by
then. But would I really? I don't even recognize myself in the mirror. I could
have him right under my nose without seeing him.
"Alex, do you remember what I told you during the animal serial killing case?"
Rocco was staring up at me with serious eyes.
I did, it was during that case, when we found tortured and killed pets all over
our little home town, it was then his eyes had changed forever. Well, I can't
really say forever. I mean. I haven't seen him for 6 years, so. Well, anyway he
had said;
'Alex, Always be Alert.'
I was going to reply to him, that I did, but then I heard something. Something
that didn't sound right. I rushed out of my shower room and knocked on door
to right of the one I had been using. Then I saw it. I looked at the door to the
shower room I had been using. Then the door that was open just to the left
of me and then I glanced at the one behind me.
Seems like I had accidently used a shower room for ladies. The side I had
been on was for girls and the one across the hallway was for guys. That's
when I noticed the other thing wrong with the door in front of me. The end
of a tie was sticking out at the top of the door.
I knocked again but I still didn't get a response. I glanced to my right. Rocco
was standing there leaning against the door to my shower room, staring at
me with a vacant eyes. I pushed the door on left closed so I could see the
attendant.
"Hey! please call an ambulance and the police! QUICKLY!" As I turned back
to the door and bent down I could see from the corner of my eye how he
stared at me for a moment and then picked up a phone.
I picked the lock and then pulled open the door. The body of a young
woman fell out before me.
Annons
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Risa-chan
Fri 20 Aug 2010 09:18
Spännande! ^_^ sorry att jag inte har läst tidigare, men äntligen har jag haft ro och tid att läsa. ^^ Fortsätt skriv, tack snälla. ;D
Rin-Rin
Fri 20 Aug 2010 10:14
:3 tack! <3 det ska jag....håller på med kapitel 2 nu och kommer förhoppningsvis att ha skrivit klart den snart
Insomnalia
Sun 15 Aug 2010 14:22
Kommer hon att klara sig?? :O Vem var hon?
Nästan lite roligt om hon plötsligt joinade deras gäng för att dom räddat hennes liv, dom måste rädda henne!! GAAAH!
Nästan lite roligt om hon plötsligt joinade deras gäng för att dom räddat hennes liv, dom måste rädda henne!! GAAAH!
Rin-Rin
Sun 15 Aug 2010 17:28
:3 ska börja skriva på kapitel 2 snart.....förhoppningsvis kan jag posta
den nästa helg men jag är inte såker på ifall jag hinner :3
den nästa helg men jag är inte såker på ifall jag hinner :3
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