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Jag är mycket nöjd med början på den här, men skulle vilja ändra de två sista styckena. :/
~Forged by Fire~
A peace forged by fire
By one party's desire
Communications wired
Totaliarism acquired
Feel the frustration
Opression of a nation
Feel the desperation
For hope and salvation
An epidemic of rage
Infects every gender and age
From shore to shore
There will be a holy war
Who will stand tall to prevail?
In a war of such an enormous scale!
In this outcome one has to fall
Another will make the gods look small
Annons
Anonymous
Mon 23 Mar 2009 10:41
Det ska vara an på andra raden i näst sista stycket. "In a war of such an enormous scale!"
Annars ser det mycket strongt ut.
Annars ser det mycket strongt ut.
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