Friday 9 November 2012 photo 2/2
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Jag måste få skryta lite med mitt NaNo projekt om jag ska orka dra skiten i land.
Detta är ett av de stycken som jag blev mycket nöjd med, (än så länge iaf...)
Beware, there will be blood.
Bloodbound Memeories (working title)
"Sonya had no time to wonder about the emotion she saw swirling there, as the man moved with lightning speed. In a split second, he was at the side of professor Ant and tore her throat open with a quick flick of his wrist. Blood gushed forth and the monster put his lips to the fatal wound he had inflicted. Ms. Ant didn’t even have time to react. Her face froze in a mask of surprise as her body went limp in the strong arms of the man. He supported her easily as he drank her blood. Sickening slurping sounds escaped him as he greedily devoured the very life of kind young Anna Ant.
It took only a few seconds before he let the body fall from his arms. Ms Ant didn’t even touch the ground before he tore the throat from Mrs Shaft and drank her blood. Sonya didn’t think. Fear had her in its paralyzing grasp, keeping her in place, making her witness the horrendous scene before her. A few slow seconds passed and all her professors except Mr Mannerstern was dead, torn open and dried by the monster who now leaned his body against the narrow bed. He was breathing heavily, as is moving so fast had caused him great stress. Blood had run in rivets down his chin, splattering his body in deep crimson red. "
Annons
Camera info
Camera GT-I9000
Focal length 4 mm
Aperture f/2.6
Shutter 1/8.4 s
ISO 400
DerangedDolls
Fri 9 Nov 2012 22:17
That awkward moment when you realise your writing is very bad... very bad indeed...
Men fy bubblan vad bra du är!!! :D
Men fy bubblan vad bra du är!!! :D
Menesong
Fri 9 Nov 2012 22:20
Been there, done that too...
Tack! Det värmer att höra dig säga det. Du har skrivit under press oftare än mig.
Tack! Det värmer att höra dig säga det. Du har skrivit under press oftare än mig.
DerangedDolls
Fri 9 Nov 2012 22:24
Blir sporrad av att läsa andras skriverier, särskilt när de är så bra att man undrar om det är en mångpublicerad författare i förklädnad som man läser från. Känner mig peppad att göra bättre ifrån mig, liksom :')
Menesong
Fri 9 Nov 2012 22:31
Jo jag vet. Jag läser ofta fanfiction och jävlar vad folk kan skriva ibland. Jag älskar att ta lärdom av hur andra skriver, mest för att det är världens bästa reserch. Läs böcker du gillar och bli inspirerad... XD
DerangedDolls
Fri 9 Nov 2012 22:32
Jamen precis! Ju mer man gillar sin egen 'röst', desto bättre ju :D
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