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You're the only one I wish I could forget,
The only one I loved and not forgive,
and though you've break my heart, you're the only one.
Cause I can't erase the times thst you hurt me and put tears on my face.
I don't wanna be without you babe,
I don't want a broken heart.
Don't wanna take breath without you babe.
I don't want to play that part.
<8
The only one I loved and not forgive,
and though you've break my heart, you're the only one.
Cause I can't erase the times thst you hurt me and put tears on my face.
I don't wanna be without you babe,
I don't want a broken heart.
Don't wanna take breath without you babe.
I don't want to play that part.
<8
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Anonym
fre 15 maj 2009 00:15
Tog mig friheten att göra lite modifikeringar, grunden är bra men jag skulle rekomendera att du läser det du skriver högt för dig själv, hör flytet i texten och funderar, vad kan jag göra bättre. För oftast blir det som bäst när man gjort det några gånger. Så är det i alla fall för mig.
Hoppas du inte tar illa upp att jag ändra på den lite, innebörden 'är den samma. Detta är vad som kallas konstruktiv kritik och det är bra!
You're the only one I wish I could forget,
The only one I loved, but not forgave,
and eventhough you've broken my heart, you're remain the one.
Cause I can not erase the times that you´ve hurt me.
The times you've made tears run down my cheeks.
Eventhough I sometimes want to.
I don't wanna be without you,
I don't want this broken heart.
Don't want to take a breath without you.
I just can't stand to be apart.
Hoppas du inte tar illa upp att jag ändra på den lite, innebörden 'är den samma. Detta är vad som kallas konstruktiv kritik och det är bra!
You're the only one I wish I could forget,
The only one I loved, but not forgave,
and eventhough you've broken my heart, you're remain the one.
Cause I can not erase the times that you´ve hurt me.
The times you've made tears run down my cheeks.
Eventhough I sometimes want to.
I don't wanna be without you,
I don't want this broken heart.
Don't want to take a breath without you.
I just can't stand to be apart.

peersikaan
fre 15 maj 2009 00:16
okeejj , din va mkt bättre, Men min va med min egen ah, typ tolkning xD hahahah. :) superputte! (y)
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