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A short film about revenge and gangs in the streets of Manchester.
Alongside Darius Britt Simon Cade is one of the most inspiring young film-teaching filmmaker on YT. It's really helpful to learn from other young filmmakers. I'm especially really impressed by his creativity in his videos.
Well...Unfortunately I'm not really satisfied with this short. Visually it looks really good. But the story doesn't fit for a short film. Although the story is well implemented, still it's not possible to feel for the characters, since the whole idea is material for a longer short film.
Really painful to see how only the thoughts for a film were not good enough to satisfy me, although everything else seemed good to me.
From what I can gander about the director is that he's ambitious, has real work ethic, some talent and because of that he bit off a bit more than a short film can really do.
With that said I think the important thing here is it really is technically well done and it wasn't a simple shoot. Sooooo many shorts are slow, and consist of people staring at junk for long periods of time...this is boring, lazy, and makes me more aware of my own mortality. This short did not waste seconds or put junk meaning into some inanimate object via pointing a camera at it for 15 seconds straight. Instead it tried to create meaning through the characters and their setting...far more work there (and it was done okay). In fact, the sound effects alone were more work than a majority of shorts I've seen. Did anyone bother to notice? But I digress.
For a clearly newer director that I'm sure Simon must be, this was a great start and is better than a majority of artsy shorts for if no other reason than sweat equity. He tried and he pushed. Most people really don't. Just keep doing pushing like you did here and you'll be on your way. Just don't forget those details!
However, yes we do have to double back on the story. I won't go into it because "overly complex" is a correct summary and it's been said (sometimes rather tersely) by the comments around this one.
But lets skip the lazy and self important criticism and boil down what may have made this better. I'll focus on the one big flaw. The story line Simon created is actually two stories...not one.
1. The brother getting killed, because he angered the bad guy 2. The main character getting killed, because he angered the bad guy.
While this may not have been obvious to many, as a writer, I was able to pick this up quick. Any more experienced writer could, which is my point, because the only thing Simon really needs to work on developing (because he is on the right track from a film perspective) is his writing. He needs to write more...and a lot more and then look into some how to's. Your first few stories are going to contain fundamental flaws. Overtime you will be able to more easily flow and create stories devoid of inherent landmines.
Just keep growing and don't lose that sense of passion. What you want may change, but how much you want it shouldn't.
Ohh, and haters are boring. Who wants to watch a show where people just yap without any stakes and then achieved nothing at the end? That'd be a pretty boring story huh? The one nice thing about stories like that is...they're forgettable. Just keep pushing and the yapping will fade away. Only the interesting and worthwhile will remain.
Go have an interesting life. Keep growing.
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